Quiet paths; somber tones; long forgotten dreams of you,
Silent voids; unfelt songs; Thoughts melting into the blue,
Ever said? Never heard! Lost into my craving dreams...
Loneliness; A dark retreat; Blend into some callous themes.
Fervor numbed! Love undone! Days lost in endless nights;
Buried spirits; fallen men; Violent and blood thirsty fights;
A dearth of smiles; Emotions scarce; the final end of nothingness,
Lost and found; Alive again; the dream of more, the life of less...
Rimless cauldrons of boiling hate rising into our lives,
The young man loved; Lost; The old man - now he strives...
Cold calidity of passions long lost into his graves,
Calm distress - All he needs; Squanders all he saves...
-Anubhav
You have a lyrical quality in this piece that sings to me. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you string these lines together with the rhymes.
ReplyDeleteI love the way this poem flows, it sounds very nice in my mind as I read it. I do find all the punctuation very distracting, but that seems to be part of your style, yes?
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